Today I welcome the lovely Martine Roberts to my blog who has sent me an excerpt from her story, Mr Darcy's Struggle, to post for your enjoyment. I will also be reviewing this story soon so watch for my review.
"New Revised Edition. What if, after initially refusing Mr Darcy's offer of marriage at the parsonage, Elizabeth finds herself in the position where she is forced to accept his proposal? The proud Mr Darcy has only six weeks to prove himself and make Elizabeth fall in love with him. Taking her reproofs to heart he is determined to woo her and become a better man. Then days before the wedding she receives another offer. Will she meet him at the altar or run to the arms of another?"
Excerpt from Chapter 3
The next morning Elizabeth dressed quietly, and
arranging her hair in a simple style. Then noticing the time, she pulled on her
bonnet and gloves and crept downstairs. Taking an apple from the bowl on the
kitchen table, she turned and gave the young maid a smile, then opened the back
door to keep her rendezvous with Mr. Darcy. As she neared the designated
meeting place, she spied him standing there, unaware of
her approach. He cut such a dashing figure in his fashionable clothes;
Elizabeth acknowledged he was an exceedingly handsome man. He could have, and
was expected to, select his bride from the very best families that society had
to offer. Instead, he had chosen her, the daughter of a simple country
gentleman. She lingered to admire his physique, and then blushed furiously when
Darcy spun round to greet her. Well aware that she had been caught, Elizabeth
lowered her eyes as he strode towards her; he paused and gave her a curt bow.
“Good morning Miss Elizabeth, I am pleased to see
you,” he started, “I thought you might resist my entreaty to meet me.”
Returning his greeting with a slight curtsy she
replied;
“Good Morning Mr. Darcy. I said I would come and as
you can see I am here."
Elizabeth noticed how he constantly fed the rim of his
hat through his fingers, betraying his state of nervousness. Finally, he
clasped his hands behind his back and began to address her.
“Miss Bennet, I must offer you my profound apologies
for my behaviour yesterday, it was unforgivable. I fear as a result of my
actions, I have put you in an untenable position. I know and understand your
sentiments in regard to my offer; indeed you made your feeling perfectly clear
yesterday. But I feel under the circumstances, and with Mr. Collins untimely
intrusion, there is no recourse left open to us but to marry.”
Darcy searched her face to gauge the impact of his
words. He expected her to raise any number of objections, or to berate him most
severely at the very least, but instead she was smiling.
“Are you laughing at me Madam?” he said stiffly.
Elizabeth raised her eyes to meet his, and let her
smile linger a little longer before saying,
“Why Mr. Darcy, what an eloquent speech, have you been
rehearsing while you waited for me?” she asked playfully.
The truth was Elizabeth had been awake most of the
night herself, turning the events over in her mind, and she too had come to the
same conclusion. There was no point in fighting the inevitable, so she had
decided to go forward with a positive frame of mind. Still, she could not help
but tease him a little.
“It appears your days as an eligible bachelor are
numbered Mr Darcy.”
“Then we are agreed?” He asked, unable to hide the
surprise in his voice, “The engagement stands?”
Elizabeth treated Darcy to a full smile, then
continued along the path, only to glanced back over her shoulder and add,
“The engagement stands.”
Elizabeth was not party to the expression of great
relief on his face, or the sagging of his shoulders as the tension left his
body. He was sure that she would protest his actions, his intolerable high
handedness; instead she was in full agreement. Also she was right in her
surmise; he had been rehearsing his address to her. He had been so utterly
wrong in his previous proposal; he could not risk alienating her again. But
what had caught his attention the most was her smile. It had been just for him.
Quickly he caught up with her and stood afore her, blocking the path. Elizabeth
gave an inward sign. She had hoped to escape further discussion on the subject,
but clearly Mr. Darcy had other ideas.
“Miss Elizabeth Bennet,” he said using her full name
“you never cease to surprise me. Do you know how much pleasure it brings me
being in your company?” he asked with a smile of his own.
Momentarily taken aback by his sudden declaration of
emotion, Elizabeth could not help herself. Raising her eyebrows she retorted
slyly,
“After the occurrence of yesterday afternoon, I think
you leave me in little doubt as to how much you savour my company sir,” and she
walked on.
Darcy threw back his head and gave a raucous laugh. He
knew their life together would never be dull; her quick wit was just another
reason he loved her. Yes, Elizabeth Bennet was the perfect woman for him, and
he could not fault his taste. Taking the few strides needed to catch up with her
he took her hand and gently kissed it. She tried to withdraw it, but he would
not oblige. Instead, he caressed her fingers with his thumb as they continued
along the path. Elizabeth was no longer aware of her surroundings; her mind was
completely focused on the sensations Darcy’s attention to her hand was
creating. She was amazed at the effects such a small caress could have on her
body. Her heart began to race as a tingling warmth radiate from the area Darcy
stroked. Suddenly, she became aware that they had stopped walking. Darcy was
looking at her, his head slightly tilted as he studied her face. She lowered
her gaze, fearful he would see the effect his closeness was having on her. Then
he softly said her name,
“Elizabeth, we have walked far enough. I must make
haste to Longbourn. Before I do so, would you permit me to kiss you goodbye?”
Elizabeth knew she should be shocked at this blatant
disregard for propriety. Instead she coyly gave her reply.
“I feel that on this occasion, it is acceptable for us
to affirm our betrothal in the manner you request Mr. Darcy,” and she waited
for him to claim her lips.
In a soft whisper Darcy said,
“Elizabeth, look at me Elizabeth.”
Suddenly feeling shy, she was reluctant to meet his
gaze. Sensing this reluctance, he ran a finger lightly down her cheek, coming
to rest under her chin. Gently he tilted her head up. The smouldering desire he
felt was unmistakably visible in his eyes, and suddenly she felt breathless. As
she parted her lips, he bent his head and let his lips gently caress hers. The
sensation his brief caress evoked, seemed to spark through her entire body. She
raised her face a little more, and Darcy was encouraged to deepen the kiss.
Savouring her timid response, Darcy permitted a
fraction of urgency to creep in as he tasted her lips. They were delicious
beyond belief, and he wanted to prolong the experience for as long as he dare.
He craved to awaken the passion and desire still dormant in her, but he knew
she did not love him, and that was the one thing he desired above all else.
With reluctance Darcy pulled away, mindful of Elizabeth’s innocence. He was
pleased she had permitted such an intimate embrace before they were married. As
she tried to catch her breath, and to restore a modicum of composure, Elizabeth
realized she would need to be on her guard when in close proximity to Darcy.
She enjoyed his kisses far too much!
“You are a hard man to resist Mr. Darcy,” she said
breathlessly.
“And I find you irresistible Miss Bennet,” he replied.
This time
Elizabeth did not shy away as he took her hand, and together they made their
way back to the parsonage.
I am very much looking forward to reading this book, especially after that excerpt!
** GIVEAWAY - ends Wednesday 8th October**
Martine has provided me a giveaway! One lucky winner will receive this beautiful set of Jane Austen novels, The Collector's Library edition. (Or if preferred an amazon gift card or Jane Austen Centre Gift Shop gift card to the value of £25.) This giveaway is open internationally.
To enter, leave a comment below and the winner will be picked randomly.
Please leave your email address (and if you would prefer one of the alternative gift card prizes then please say so.) If you are the lucky winner, I will pass on your email to Martine who will be in touch.
Good luck!
Your affectionate friend,
Now I am curious to find out how what happened that they have to be married
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I am looking forward to reading this! Good luck!
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I hope you buy and enjoy the book! I can't wait to read it! Good luck!
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ReplyDeleteI hope you buy and enjoy it :) I am looking forward to it :) Good luck!
DeleteThis is a delicious excerpt, Martine. I can't wait to find out who has offered for Elizabeth days before her wedding to Darcy. I hope she stay the course and end up with him.
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I am intrigued by that bit as well! Surely she wont leave Darcy!? Good luck!
DeleteWhat an enticing excerpt! (and I do mean enticing!) :) The blurb has my attention and my curiosity has been piqued! Thank you for sharing a little about this book with us and for the giveaway opportunity too.
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I am so enticed as well! Good luck!
DeleteOf all the excerpts Martine could've picked, that was the best one!! I was hooked from the very beginning and groaned when I reached the end! Dying to know how their story continues! Thanks for sharing Martine & Mrs Darcy :)
ReplyDeleteI am very excited to read this! :) How the story continues? Do you know something I don't and is this part of a series or something?
DeleteGood luck with the giveaway!
Great excerpt! I am looking forward to your review, Sophie.
ReplyDeleteMy preference would be a signed copy of this book. I wish I knew where this was in the story to wonder at Darcy's Struggles. We're they before or after the engagement? I think I need to read this. Thanks for the delightful morsel.
Thank you! I am looking forward to it as well. And I will ask Martine if you win :) good luck! I believe this is just after the engagement... but I won't know for sure until I read it!
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Doesn't it?! Good luck!
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On behalf of Crystal Meekins Jones:
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I have to read now so curious to know what happens. My email is treefrog8733@gmail.com I would love the box set
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DeleteThank For sharing with is this wonderful chapter, it is Amazing!!!!
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I've already have the books so I would like the Amazon gift card.
You are welcome! Good luck!
DeleteAlways an interesting twist in the story and I look forward to seeing where it all goes. Thanks for sharing the excerpt and for the giveaway opportunity. If I were to win, I would enjoy a gift card prize as I already have these wonderful books. sophiarose1816 at gmail dot com
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Can't wait to read the rest of the book!
ReplyDeleteI find this chapter amazing !!! I look foward to know how their story continues !!!
ReplyDeleteI would like to enter the giveaway & I would love the Jane Austen books Thank you :)
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It sounds great doesn't it! Good luck!
DeleteWho is the mystery man? I want to know!! But....I guess it will have to wait (sad face).
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I want to know as well! Good luck and you are welcome!
DeleteAnd..thanks so MUCH as well! Sorry, I'm on a ferry in the Irish Sea on my home from a holiday and the ship is moving around just a little too much for my liking. Makes using a virtual keyboard a little tricky but I need something to take my mind off it.
ReplyDeleteI MUST read this! Love!!!!
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Good luck!
DeleteThank you for this giveaway ! I would love to win the set of Jane Austen novels !
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I love these little glimpse of the book, it's very intriguing. I love that Elizabeth can't resist Darcy as much she wants.
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I read this over the summer so my lips are sealed! Will say how much I loved it though! I would rather have the Jane Austen Centre Gift Card if I am lucky enough to win!
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