Sunday, July 16, 2017

Blog Re-launch tour: Just Don't Get Sick by Joana Starnes


So today, I am welcoming my lovely friend, and wonderful author, Joana Starnes, with her post about illness in the Regency era.

I have known Joana since 2014, when we realised through Facebook that we lived in the same town.  We met for a coffee and the rest is history! We have shared many, many adventures since then, attending the festivals together, going to lectures and talks, visiting National Trust properties, and as many other activities as we could possibly manage - sometimes with the most tenuous Austen connection - but any excuse for sharing a day out together! I am so glad to call Joana a friend, and it is all thanks to our mutual love of Jane Austen. 

So now, it's over to her. Thank you for this excellent and interesting post, Joana! 


When Jane was ill at Netherfield in Lost in Austen do you remember Mr Bingley insisting ‘No-no-no,  Miss Price must stay here, she is the best possible nurse. She has Paracetamols? And well he might rely on Amanda’s paracetamols, because there was precious little he or anyone else could offer as a substitute.

If you ever lay hands on a time machine and set it to the early 1800s be sure to have a healthy supply of painkillers and antibiotics with you, and if you’re not past childbearing age think again before you get the engine running! Mrs Bennet blithely tells her husband that ‘people don’t die of little trifling colds’, and if that held true it was largely thanks to human resilience and not to Georgian medicine.

The best medical attention that Mr Darcy’s ten thousand a year could buy would have been from a Fellow of the Royal College of Physicians. The charter granted by Henry VIII gave the Fellows and their licentiates the exclusive right to practise in London and for 7 miles around. The College also granted an ‘extra licence’ that permitted the holder to practise as physician outside the 7 mile limit, but the restrictions were difficult to police. As for the degree itself, it was acquired by studying the writings of Hippocrates (400s BC) and Galen (129-216 AD) and it was acceptable to have someone sitting the final examination for you.

Outside of London and the major cities the most common medical practitioner was the apothecary, such as Mr Jones, summoned to Netherfield to attend Jane and prepare draughts, in the absence of paracetamols. In theory, the apothecaries were the equivalent of a modern day pharmacists.

(The Apothecary and his Trade, John White, Bath 2015)

They were supposed to supply medicines rather than prescribe them, but especially in rural areas they might have been the only source of medical attention and acted more or less as general practitioners.

(Visiting the Apothecary, Bath 2015)

Some, the surgeon-apothecaries, would have been apprenticed in performing minor operations such as lancing boils, setting bones, bloodletting and sometimes even amputations.

The training varied widely. At the beginning of the century the successful completion of an apprenticeship was enough for setting up practice and earning a living from dispensing drugs and performing minor surgery. Apothecaries greatly outnumbered doctors, even in major cities. In 1775 Bristol, for example, there were 8 physicians to 56 surgeon-apothecaries.

And their services did not come cheap. Household bills from Dunham Massey, a large estate near Manchester now in the care of the National Trust, show that in 1822 two apothecaries were paid £55 pounds over a 3-month period, at a time when the house steward, the highest-ranking male servant, earned £90 a year and the third housemaid £10 a year.

All well and good. If you’re taken ill in Regency England let’s say you’re lucky enough to afford the best treatment money can buy. Let’s say you can even afford the services of the disciples of one of the most reputable physicians of his day, William Buchan, MD (1729 – 1805), Fellow of the Royal College of Physicians, Edinburgh and author of the Treatise on the Prevention and Cure of Diseases that went through 19 editions, sold 80 000 copies in his lifetime, was translated into the main European languages and among other things earned him a letter of commendation and a gold medal from the Empress of Russia.

                                                                               William Buchan, MD

If Georgian medicine is your thing and you’ve skimmed through the Treatise for fun, you will have discovered that some of Dr Buchan’s principles were surprisingly in tune with modern concepts. He believed that cleanliness, exercise and a sensible diet keep people healthy; that fresh air is beneficial in the sickroom; that feverish patients shouldn’t be covered with too many blankets, and that the number of visitors to the sickbed should be kept to a minimum in order to limit the risk of infection. Also, he maintained that mothers should nurse their babies if at all possible, and if a nurse is hired the mother should keep a close eye on her offspring’s welfare rather than abandoning her newborn child ‘to the sole care of a hireling.’ He argued that babies should not be swaddled and that suitable clothes allowing free movement should be used both for children and adults. Also, that young ladies warmed by exercise after a long night of dancing should not then gad about outdoors in their thin muslins without suitable wraps if they cared for their health. There are whole chapters dedicated to cleanliness, intemperance, the risks posed by wet clothes and wet feet, as well as the problems caused by succumbing to strong emotions like anger, fear, grief and love. If you have a really quiet afternoon, look up Dr Buchan’s Treatise on the Internet and glance over the introductory chapters. Poor Mr Darcy, he had no idea, had he, of the medical dangers he exposed himself to when he allowed himself to be ruled by passion!

Sadly, most of the treatment sections of the Treatise make grim reading. The germ theory of disease would not emerge for another five decades or so after Dr Buchan’s death. The all-prevailing belief in Georgian times was that disease was caused by an imbalance in the Hippocratic four humours: blood, black bile, yellow bile and phlegm, and treatment should be aimed at restoring that balance. How? Why, by relying on time-honoured methods, of course: bleeding, vomiting, purgation, applying irritants on the skin to cause blisters and thus extract the poisons from the body and other similar measures that leave the modern reader in wonder that patients survived the cure, as well as the condition. Calomel (mercurous chloride) was liberally prescribed as a purgative. Everyone swore by Laudanum (tincture of opium, approximately 10% opium equivalent to 1% morphine) and it was considered highly beneficial in treating most things, from palsy to nervous dispositions, all the way to calming down babies and children who grizzled too much.

What about Miss Bennet’s fever? If the heat of the body is very high, 40-50 drops of sweet spirit of nitre should be made into a draught, with an ounce of rosewater, two ounces of common water, and half an ounce of syrup. And prompt bleeding is of the greatest importance in cases such as these!

But you may be reassured to hear she must also drink plenty of diluting liquors such as water-gruel, or oatmeal-tea, clear whey, barley-water, apple-tea or orange-whey, deemed an excellent cooling drink.

Heaven forefend that the condition should worsen and affect the lungs! In that case a man would benefit from losing 12-14 ounces of blood (but less if the patient is a female of a delicate constitution). And if there is violent pain to the chest it should be alleviated with a fomentation made by ‘boiling a handful of the flowers of the elder, camomile and common mallows or any other soft vegetables, in a proper quantity of water’. Leaves of various plants such as cabbage might also be applied warm to the patient’s side ‘with advantage.’

Mustard whey is beneficial in nervous fevers (Mrs Bennet must have required a steady supply) but Dr Buchan also argues that in nervous disorders exercise is superior to all medicines. Anything goes: riding on horseback is considered the best, but walking or riding in a carriage might work as well, as would a trip to the sea or even a sea voyage. Maybe Mrs Bennet knew what she was talking about when she thought that a little sea-bathing would set her up for good.

Dr Buchan has a lot more to say about all manner of conditions, but I’d much rather not put you off your dinner. Have a look through his Treatise if you’re of a strong constitution and if you’re lucky enough to go time-travelling to Regency England just don’t get sick!

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J J Rivlin ‘Getting a Medical Qualification in England in the Nineteenth Century’

P Hunting ‘History of the Society of Apothecaries’

Pamela Sambrook ‘A Country House at Work’, 2003

Wm Buchan ‘Treatise on the Prevention and Cure of Diseases’, 1785
Images from ‘So You Think You’re Sick’ – a talk and demonstration by John White at the Jane Austen Bath Festival 2015 (photos J Starnes).


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Sunday, July 02, 2017

Blog Tour: Mendacity & Mourning by Jan Ashton - with giveaway!

I am thrilled today to be part of the blog tour for Jan Ashton's latest release, Mendacity & Mourning.  My thanks also goes to Janet Taylor for inviting me to take part.

It is a truth universally acknowledged that a gossip in possession of misheard tales and desirous of both a good wife and an eager audience need only descend upon the sitting rooms of a small country town in order to find satisfaction. And with a push from Lady Catherine, Mr. Collins sets alight a series of misunderstandings, rumours, and lies that create obstacles to a romance between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.

This slightly unhinged romantic comedy follows Darcy as he sets off to find himself a wife and instead finds himself pulled into the mire of his aunt’s machinations and his own fascination with Elizabeth, whom he believes betrothed to another. As Meryton judges him the grieving groom of Anne de Bourgh and a caddish dallier with the hearts of others, Darcy must ferret out the truth behind his cousin’s disappearance, protect his sister from the fretful fate of all Fitzwilliam females, and, most importantly, win Elizabeth’s heart.

I’m so happy to be here at Laughing With Lizzie. Thanks for hosting me, Sophie!

This vignette has two parts of a longer post-epilogue story I wrote for Mendacity & Mourning and posted at A Happy Assembly. I’ve edited it a bit to avoid major spoilers, but you can find it on myMeryton Press blog. Hope you enjoy!

An Awful Object On A Holiday Eve

Darcy leaned back into the wall, arms crossed, brow furrowed.

“I dread this, you know. Michaelmas was lovely, and the harvest ball the best of recent years. Must we truly stay two nights in Kent?”

Elizabeth, her attention focused on their youngest child’s reddened gums and unhappy disposition, glanced up at her husband. Her impatience warred with amusement as she gazed at his expression.

“Such a sad face, Fitzwilliam. You and your sons look remarkably similar when unhappy.”

“If you wish me to tuck in my lower lip, I will argue your point. I prefer to put it to far better use.” Darcy pushed off the wall and joined his wife on the settee. He looked fondly at the teary-eyed bundle in her arms. “Will he sleep tonight? Our other children were more skilled at their nightly duties.”

“No they were not, they would settle for their nurses. Alexander is less amenable to arms that are not mine.”

“Well then yes,” her husband replied smugly, “he is a child most like me.”

Elizabeth put her hand on his thigh. “We have been in Hertfordshire and London for a month now. It is but two days in Kent, and then we can begin our long journey home.” She leaned her head against his shoulder. “It will go quickly; we have been blessed with mild weather.”

He sighed. “True, yet this is our first Christmas away from Pemberley.”

“It shall be the last. I have instructed my mother that apoplexies, or as this was, a hint of apoplexy, are not to be had again so close to Christmas.”

“Despite our fears, your father is hale and well and eager to regain his seat in Pemberley’s library.”

“As am I, Fitzwilliam. My seat, my bed, my home….” She relished the heated look her pouting husband swept over her.

“But first to Rosings,” he sighed.

“Oh do cheer up. The children will enjoy their cousins, and Richard has hidden flasks and bottles on the grounds, yes?”

He nodded.

“You have reminded James and Henry about the proper direction of eyeballs and that pointing is ungentleman-like behaviour?”

He nodded.

“You have reminded Richard about the proper direction of eyeballs and that pointing is ungentleman-like behaviour?”

He laughed.

“Then all is as it should be. Our children cannot wear blinders and be sheltered from the onslaught of joy decking Rosings’ halls.”

“Nor can we protect them from what may already stir in them,” Darcy said glumly. “Their Fitzwilliam blood.”

“Hush” she cried. “They are equal bits of Darcy and Bennet and Gardiner as well, and I dare say that it is a good thing to see one family’s eccentricities overpower those of another. None of our children, those that can speak, anyway, talk incessantly of fruit nor do any appear frail of mind or body.”

“We are fortunate,” he replied gravely. “Thus far.”

Elizabeth, smirking, gave a dramatic sigh. “Mayhap we should keep our perfect family small and add no more babies? Five be enough?”

He looked at his wife, considering her proposal.

She stood and walked to the cradle, placing Alexander inside and arranging the blankets around his sleeping form. “If we determine the risk is too great, we must stop those practises that might create another child.”

Darcy started and practically jumped to his feet. “How impertinent you are! That is advice best given to Bingley and your sister!”

Elizabeth bit her lip. Hardly twelve years married and Jane was confined with her eighth child. Or, from the manner in which she carried it, perhaps numbers eight and nine. She and Darcy had thus far produced five, and that handful was enough…for the present. Already she suspected another arrival in the new year.

The touch of her husband’s hand on hers recollected Elizabeth from her musings. “We are incapable of creating any child short of perfection,” Darcy said, tenderly stroking his young son’s hair. “Even this one, he cries only because he craves his mother. As do I. Often and always.”


“It goes unsaid.”

“Say it.”

“I want and desire you.”

Elizabeth’s lips curled into a mischievous smile. Her eyes sparkled, and Darcy was aflame. Nearly twelve years together, and he knew her signals. He knew her sighs, her smiles, her scent. His senses and sensibilities were in harmony with hers. She knew all of him as well, and she knew he needed soothing. Her fingers traced the edge of his waistcoat. She felt more than heard his sharp intake of breath.

“Wonderful man, now that Alexander is in his bed, please take me to mine.”

“Ours.” His nose nuzzled hers.

“See, my Darcy? Always up for a healthy debate.”


There truly was nothing Richard enjoyed more than to be the last arrival at a family party. The adults would be settled, with a drink or two coursing through and calming their blood. The children would have spent their energies greeting one another, their ranks thinned by absence of the nappers, the tantrum throwers, and the easily distracted, who had been put to bed, exiled to the nursery, or wandered off. Strolling downstairs in a freshly brushed coat to an unusually quiet house, Richard’s throat and soul were parched for liquid spirits. In search of his safest hiding place, he walked into Rosings’ smallest sitting room. There he chanced upon Darcy with two of his children perched on his lap as he read to them from Aesop’s Fables. Richard noted the expressions on the youngsters, a mere three and five years of age, were as stupefied as his upon learning the sad fate of the dog who, confused by his own reflection in the water, lost his lambchop when he opened his jaw to steal the other pup’s meat.

“Papa,” cried Henry. “The poor thing went to bed hungry.”

“Because he was greedy,” Darcy said firmly but gently.

“No, he was stupid.” The five-year-old’s lip quivered.

“He was a dog, son. Acting on instinct and without thought.”

Emma burst into tears.

Richard leapt into action. “I say, Darcy. Why does Elizabeth ever leave you alone with her children?”

The tears evaporated. “Uncle Dickie!” Henry launched himself from his father’s lap to Richard’s leg. The bad leg. The one that had endured horse kicks, a poorly aimed sword, a dog bite, and a log burn. God, he hated France and its Frenchmen. The women, though…so skilled, so blessed by glorious assets, and so generously talented in sharing them.


 Ah, children…

He winced through his smile and leaned over to pick up the lad. Emma remained, wide-eyed, on her father’s lap.

Darcy greeted him with a grimace. “Hello Dickie. Prompt as ever, I see. Tell me again how you made general if you cannot tell time?”

“Remind me how you keep churning out moppets if you cannot—.”

“Children,” Darcy cried. “I have a special message for you to deliver to Mama.” He bent over and kissed Emma’s cheek before setting her on the floor. “Petal,” he said gently, his fingers straightening her ribbon, “please go with Sally and give that kiss to Mama. I believe she is with your Aunt Georgiana in the music room.”

His daughter hugged him. “Yes, Papa.”

Henry frowned. “But Uncle Dickie is here. I want to see his swords and wounds.”

Richard patted his head. “No gaping gashes this time, my boy. But I do have a tale to tell of an angry bore.”

Henry’s mouth dropped open. “Oh my! A wild boar?”

Emma gasped and ran over, seizing and pulling her brother’s dangling foot. “With sharp teeth and hot hungry breath?”

“The very kind,” Richard said, winking at Darcy. His cousin rolled his eyes before nodding at the young woman who had appeared in the doorway.

Richard tossed Henry in the air before settling the boy on his feet. “Off with you, soldier. Upon the orders of your father and his superior officer!”

“Go now with Sally, children. Please give Mama my message, Emma.”

With a wave and a whirl, the Darcy children skipped out of the room. Their father leaned back in his chair and watched them adoringly before turning angrily toward his cousin. “How lovely you are, arriving here simply to frighten my children. Please describe this ‘angry boar.’ Is it one I might recognise?”

“All too well, I fear. Aunt Catherine and her hot hungry breath has Father in a tizzy. He despises this place and losing his holiday hosting perch has him greatly unsettled.”

Darcy nodded, his voice calmer. “Yet he has chosen to come here.”

“Choice is an odd word, cousin.” Richard’s eyes scanned the room, taking in its cosy warmth and decided lack of family portraiture. No wonder Darcy has taken refuge here; it is safe for children and those of refined sensibilities. “My mother has chosen to be at Rosings. My brother and his family are here, as am I. Thus, choice is no longer my father’s.”

“Hmm. So, why are we here?”

Richard stared at the contented philosopher of Pemberley. Wonderful, he is all about the thinking and I just wish to start the drinking. Now where is that damn bottle of port?

Author Bio:

Jan Ashton didn’t meet Jane Austen until she was in her late teens, but in a happy coincidence, she shares a similarity of name with the author and celebrates her birthday on the same day Pride & Prejudice was first published. Sadly, she’s yet to find any Darcy and Elizabeth candles on her cake, but she does own the action figures.

Like so many Austen fans, Jan was an early and avid reader with a vivid imagination and a well-used library card. Her family’s frequent moves around the U.S and abroad encouraged her to think of books and their authors as reliable friends. It took a history degree and another decade or two for her to start imagining variations on Pride & Prejudice, and anotherdecade—filled with career, marriage, kids, and a menagerie of pets—to start writing them. Today, in between writing Austen variations, Jan lives in the Chicago area, eats out far too often with her own Mr. Darcy, andenjoys membership in the local and national chapters of the Jane Austen Society of North America. 

Mendacity & Mourning is her second book with Meryton Press. She published A Searing Acquaintance in 2016.

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06/19Babblings of a Bookworm; Vignette, GA
06/20My Jane Austen Book Club; Author/Character Interview, GA
06/21Half Agony, Half Hope;Review, Excerpt
06/22From Pemberley to Milton; Guest Post, Excerpt, GA
06/23More Agreeably Engaged;Vignette, GA
06/24Just Jane 1813;Review, GA
06/25Margie’s Must Reads; Guest Post, GA
06/26Of Pens and Pages; Review, Excerpt, GA
06/27Tomorrow is Another Day; Review, GA
06/28Austenesque Reviews; Vignette, GA
06/29My Vices and Weaknesses; Character Interview, GA
07/01Darcyholic Diversions; Author Interview, GA
07/02Laughing With Lizzie; Vignette, Excerpt, GA
07/03Diary of an Eccentric;Review

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Wednesday, June 28, 2017

Blog Tour: The Exile: Kitty Bennet and the Belle Époque by Don Jacobson - with giveaway!

I am thrilled today to be part of the blog tour for Don Jacobson's latest release, The Exile: Kitty Bennet and the Belle Époque.  My thanks also goes to Janet Taylor for inviting me to take part.

Beware of What You Wish For

The Bennet Wardrobe may grant it!

Longbourn, December 1811. The day after Jane and Lizzy marry dawns especially cold for young Kitty Bennet. Called to Papa’s bookroom, she is faced with a resolute Mr. Bennet who intends to punish her complicity in her sister’s elopement. She will be sent packing to a seminary in far-off Cornwall.

She reacts like any teenager chafing under the “burden” of parental rules—she throws a tantrum. In her fury, she slams her hands against the doors of The Bennet Wardrobe.

Her heart’s desire?

I wish they were dead! Anywhere but Cornwall!  Anywhere but here!

As Lydia later said, “The Wardrobe has a unique sense of humor.”

London, May 1886.  Seventeen-year-old Catherine Marie Bennet tumbles out of The Wardrobe at Matlock House to come face-to-face with the austere Viscount Henry Fitzwilliam, a scion of the Five Families and one of the wealthiest men in the world. However, while their paths may have crossed that May morning, Henry still fights his feelings for another woman, lost to him nearly thirty years in his future.  And Miss Bennet must decide between exile to the remote wastelands of Cornwall or making a new life for herself in Victorian Britain and Belle Époque France.

The Bennet Wardrobe Series is an alternative history in the Jane Austen Universe. While the characters are familiar, I have endeavored to provide each of them with an opportunity to grow into three-dimensional personalities, although not necessarily in the Regency period.  If they were shaped or stifled by the conventions of the period, the time-traveling powers of The Wardrobe helped solve their problems, make penance, and learn lessons by giving them a chance to escape that time frame, if only for a brief, life-changing interlude.

Would it have been possible for them to do so staying on the Regency timeline?

Perhaps. However, something tickled my brain—maybe it was the intersection between my youthful fascination with speculative fiction and my mature appreciation of Austen and 19th Century fiction—that threw the idea of the Wardrobe up in front of me.  Now my protagonists could be immersed in different timeframes beyond the Regency to learn that which they needed to learn and in the process carry the eternal story of love and change forward to even the 21st Century.

Atmospherics in JAFF

All sorts of questions bedevil authors.

Are my characters believable?

Is the plot believable?

Is the world in which my characters interact with the plot itself believable?

How often have we read a book that has a compelling plot only to start wondering why the characters are responding to the cruxes as they are? In other words, if Lizzy is kidnapped, she fights her attacker every conscious moment. She does not sit primly like a young miss awaiting a dance at Almack’s. That would not be Elizabeth Bennet. Darcy, in his search for her, braves every conceivable trial. He does not hire the Bow Street Runners and then retire to Darcy House. While he is reserved and keeps his inner Colonel Fitzwilliam under strict regulation, the moment one of those he cares about is threatened, he becomes “a one-man assault.”[i]

How often have we begged an author (much as John Adams argued with Rousseau or Wollstonecraft in his ephemeral but remarkably revealing Marginalia) to ‘Just have them do something that reveals their inner discourse.’This is different from characters moving in relation to plot. Rather, it is regular behavior that informs us of the mindset of the character. Thus, our Elizabeth tramps all over the countryside as she burns off her impertinent energy and shows her resistance to the social constraints bearing down upon women of her class. The oleaginous Collins bows and scrapes to all betters, but especially those who control his next meal.  We never need to hear a word from his mouth to understand his true nature.

However, even if characters act as they ought in response to the plot movers and show us their inner workings, the setting of the world in which they exist must accurately contribute to the reader’s comprehension of why they are shaped as they are, why they move as they do. 

Atmospherics are the one feature that unites the book’s realm and the reader’s world.

There is a code which we in Western Civilization have developed over the nearly three thousand years since the Greeks.  We use it to understand why persons act as they do based upon a complex interaction of factors that form a matrix of perception.

Consider this…

The rain is pouring down outside of the drawing room. Lady Catherine is upon her “throne.” Suddenly she begins to laugh.  Is she happy or is she insane?

Admittedly it is Lady Catherine. But, a rainy day is not conducive to jolly behavior. Your conclusion that she is playing with less than 52 cards would not be amiss.

See how rain may be one atmospheric that sets a tone in this excerpt from Chapter VIII of The Exile: Kitty Bennet and the Belle Époque.

She rested her face against the rain-speckled glass that cooled her flushed cheek. The soft patter of the early afternoon shower washed away all of the noise worrying her thoughts and settled the troubled knot in her middle, an unwelcome and periodic companion since she peeked out of the Wardrobe in Henry’s room over four years ago.

Now twenty-one, Kitty is home from school on the night of Henry Fitzwilliam’s engagement ball. She is not sad, but rather wistful. The chapter develops from there.

The mood can be further darkened by forcing the mercury to drop. Consider this fragment from Chapter XXVII, deep in Kitty’s troubles.

Peering out between the folds of dusty, worn cloth, Kitty had gazed over at the frost creeping down the tattered wallpaper that had been new when Napoleon III ruled. Her world had become so small, circumscribed by the walls of this tiny icebox. She could not find the energy to shift from the chair. Even if she did, where would she go? The tiny circuit of bed to commode to table to chair and back again already defined her life. No variation could be found that could relieve the boredom.

Ennui is certainly a curse, especially for those caught in an unending cycle of seeking and disappointment. Here Lord Henry Fitzwilliam battles the depressing feeling that nothing is going right…and he cannot concentrate on anything else in Chapter XXIX.

He made a disgusted sound and pushed back from his desk, walking over to the sideboard to pour a dram of whiskey. Slipping on his dark glasses, he then gazed out a window into the barren garden behind the townhouse; for how long, he was unclear. These brown studies, a feature of his personality since 1883, had become more frequent as the absence of young Miss Bennet had lengthened. Staring out the window seemed as productive a use of his time as anything else. Little mattered to him.

There is but one word to describe the atmosphere created in the next excerpt from Chapter XXXVI…and the French is more powerful than the English…paix.

Henry stepped out into that expanse seeking solitude beneath the drooping willows that cooled the manicured lawn surrounding their trunks. Spying a bench hidden behind an ancient tree, he settled onto the white-painted iron filigree and tipped his head back against the rough bark. He stared at, without really registering, the fragmented and refracted rays that were split by the foliage. A singular peace he had not experienced for nine years—plus thirty-odd—overtook him as the worry that had been his constant companion since July drained away.

To this point, weather and place have shaped the context within which characters establish themselves. There is one more element…perhaps the most powerful—light.

Two excerpts each use light to set the mood for two proposals.

The first is from The Maid and The Footman where Annie Reynolds has been sent to the Blue Parlor at Burghley Houseto await her love, Sergeant Henry Wilson. Here, the room is nearly monochromatic.

A cheery coal fire popped and sizzled in the grate, giving the room a distinctive reddish brown cast. Annie dug into her memory trying to recall where she had seen such a shade before; searching about for something that nagged at the edges of her conscious thought. …

Titian…that is the color named after the Venetian artist who portrayed many of his women subjects with auburn hair. I remember when young Mr. Darcy returned to Pemberley from his Grand Tour with one of the Master’s portraits of a young lady. Her hair was exactly the same hue![ii]

Curious, Annie began to wander around the modest-sized room looking at the paintings that graced the walls. …one, obviously by Sir Thomas Lawrence, was clearly a copy of Lord Tom and Lady Mary’s wedding portrait. Lawrence had captured the image of love.

She studied the unusual composition of Lord Tom standing directly behind his seated wife, both hands on her shoulders. Lady Mary’s head was tipped slightly upwards and turned away from the painter—not enough to obscure her features but making it obvious that the focus of her attention was not the artist behind his easel, but rather her husband whose tender touch had stirred deep emotions. Her left hand, the jeweled wedding band clearly visible, reached up across her bodice to caress his right where it rested on her bare skin.

Would the portrait have set as profound a tone if the room had been awash in afternoon light? Perhaps…but dimness removes all the other influences that may have competed for Annie’s attention. And, we know what is to come.

And, we are equally prepared for the final denouement in The Exile when, in Chapter XL, we come across this scene in Renoir’s studio. Consider the mention of Renoir’s wife and Kitty’s friend, Aline Charigot-Renoir, as emblematic of the tone leading to where we know the tableau will lead.

Now, in the late afternoon, golds and oranges gave dimension to barren worktables. Yet the room was neither dead nor stripped of life. On the contrary, one could still feel the undercurrent of potential, as if the very walls had absorbed the surfeit of Renoir’s creative energies. 

 Kitty wandered through the studio herself bathed in that remarkable light streaming in through the floor to ceiling glass walls. Given Renoir’s version of ‘freedom of the city,’ she opened cabinets filled with pigmented wonders…landscapes here, group scenes there. His portraits of Aline, a lifelong passion, some just studies, others completed except for varnish, were stored in a special place reserved for her alone.

She did not hear Henry enter, so entranced was she with the artist’s genius.

To Henry’s eyes, Kitty was a gilded statue come to life. Her white summer gown captured the golden hue. Her straw blonde hair was burnished and enriched by the late afternoon glow.

Writers have an exquisite toolbox when it comes to the way they craft a reader’ s experience. The three elements of character, plot, and atmosphere set the stage for the transformation of common words into a river upon which the reader is borne to new worlds of understanding.

[i]Arthur Jackson, WWII Medal of Honor recipient.

Author Bio:

Don Jacobson has written professionally for forty years.  His output has ranged from news and features to advertising, television and radio.  His work has been nominated for Emmys and other awards.  He has previously published five books, all non-fiction.  In 2016, he published the first volume of The Bennet Wardrobe SeriesThe Keeper: Mary Bennet’s Extraordinary Journey, novel that grew from two earlier novellas. The Exile is the second volume of The Bennet Wardrobe Series.  Other JAFF P&P Variations include the paired books “Of Fortune’s Reversal” and “The Maid and The Footman.”

Jacobson holds an advanced degree in History with a specialty in American Foreign Relations.  As a college instructor, Don teaches United States History, World History, the History of Western Civilization and Research Writing.

He is a member of JASNA-Puget Sound.  Likewise, Don is a member of the Austen Authors collective (see the internet, Facebook and Twitter).

            He lives in the Seattle, WA area with his wife and co-author, Pam, a woman Ms. Austen would have been hard-pressed to categorize, and their rather assertive four-and-twenty pound cat, Bear.  Besides thoroughly immersing himself in the JAFF world, Don also enjoys cooking; dining out, fine wine and well-aged scotch whiskey.

His other passion is cycling.  Most days from April through October will find him “putting in the miles” around the Seattle area (yes there are hills).  He has ridden several “centuries” (100 mile days).  Don is especially proud that he successfully completed the AIDS Ride—Midwest (500 miles from Minneapolis to Chicago) and the Make-A-Wish Miracle Ride (300 miles from Traverse City, MI to Brooklyn, MI).

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06/15From Pemberley to Milton; Guest Post, GA

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06/19Diary of an Eccentric;Excerpt, GA

06/20Savvy Verse and Wit; Guest Post, GA

06/21Darcyholic Diversions; Author Interview, GA

06/22My Vices and Weaknesses; Review, Excerpt, GA

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I wish Don all the best with this release as well as any stories in the future!